by Pamela Rossow

he went about
not in front
beside or near
or above just
from around
and against

she went amid
along and in
towards at and
with not off or
by or beyond
beneath or below

©Pamela Rossow 2011


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3 thoughts on “About by Pamela Rossow

  1. I get a feeling of alienation; two people who could be close but never really touch. With all the prepositions being place words, just a location in space; I am just going on intuition, Pamela and I don’t know if I am anywhere close but I just never see an intersection or connection which if that is what you are conveying—you hit your mark! That is my interpretation and I feel tension between two people; all too familiar to me. Clever!

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