Devil~ by Derek Plato

First love
First heartbreak
First to visit my little world
First to make my wall form

Her devious beauty was flawless
Her devious life was flawed
Crimson red hair that always flows next to me
Crimson red blood that leaves my cuts caused by her

She made me a better man
She made me a worst person
She made my heart beat fast
In the end

She made it black

©Derek Plato

 

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Born in Northridge, when my mother passed away I moved to Los Angeles, California. I started writing when the love of my life passed away. Ever since then, I have written stories and poems for her.

 
 
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2 thoughts on “Devil~ by Derek Plato

  1. Ooh, I like this! So many can relate to the point you’re making in this poem.

    “She made me a better man
    She made me a worst person
    She made my heart beat fast
    In the end

    She made it black”

    Loved loved this part!
    deb

  2. To the point; I liked the play on flawed and flawless and the use of the word crimson; though I usually avoid repetition it worked well here derekplato. Sharp and short like the stab of a knife. Clear imagery in your first piece; keep it up!


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