Portia <3 it! Love your angst too…awesome! Don't ever stop writing!
Neil

Tameka excellent writes!

I should always read a poem twice before commenting!
However, what doesn’t change for me, is the way you easily move between characters and that to me is part of the brilliance of this poem!

Thanks Ron for re-enforcing my loathing of visiting the dentist
Love the writing – you captured it perfectly and from multiple POV – brilliant!

Debbie thanks again, I really appreciate your comments.

Debbie thank you!

Thank you Elle!

Thanks Pam

Ron – thanks for the comment.

Portia ~ plenty of emotion in this piece. I felt that relief too upon reading that she had “come around”! Very sobering last couple of sentences too – Nice Job!

Ron – this is a GREAT poem! I love everything about it – wow – excellent! Every time I read it I see more and learn more…
Neil

Autumn Eliza – You keep getting better and better…your emotions are obvious yet again – time to take these pieces and show the World!

Lisa – great stuff! Again you provide me with so many images and so many paths to go down with these words….exceptional!

Patrick – nice job! I had that claustrophobic feeling, while reading this – and you certainly never let the tension lapse.

Neil

Portia – many thanks!

Edward – it is such a pleasure to read your poems. Your words provide imagery, that takes to these places – I feel as though I am silent passenger. Thank you.
Neil

Pam sometimes, these memories and feelings are the hardest to quantify – there was definitely both components you mentioned in this poem – the end result, differing depending on each person’s point of view! Tank […]

Willow <3 I always appreciate that you take time to read and comment. Like your idea of going back and reading……

Edward – many thanks for the comment – your description is very apt, and gives me a new appreciation.
Neil

Romeo and Juliet revisited!
Hang in there Autumn Eliza, as the seasons change, so do parent’s!